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	Enoch
	Enoch
Information
Played by:	User:Cyclops
Height:	5'11
Weight:	146 lbs
Race:	Skaa
Age:	22
Eye Color:	Blue
Hair Color:	Brown
Figure:	Thin, lanky, with toned muscles.
Occupation:	Allomancer / Eclipse Knight
Rank / Skill Level:	Expert
Status:	Approved
Setting:	Embers of Soteria

Latest revision as of 02:56, 25 April 2024

Enoch is an introspective young man, prone to careful thought and meticulous preparation. A tinge of self-consciousness colors his actions, yet beneath the surface lies a fierce crusader's heart. Once his loyalty is earned, he becomes an unwavering ally, though his slowness to anger can sometimes alienate others.

His deep religious convictions center around the Church of the Survivor, where he worships the legendary Kelsier, a man who endured the unendurable. Enoch also venerates Kelsier's heir, Lady Vin. Though he never met them, their role in the rebellion has elevated them to divine status in his eyes. Lady Vin embodies forgiveness and deceptive power, while Kelsier represents the quintessential hero, his strength bold and unconcealed.

Enoch harbors a fundamental mistrust for traditional power structures. In his view, authority stems from earned trust, not titles or institutions. He prefers to exist outside the rigid confines of governments and controlling organizations.

Phrases

The Survivor is watching.: This is something to fear, and can be said either in jest or in a serious way. When said in a serious way it is usually to do with cheating someone or planning to step on someone lower than yourself to get ahead, as a reason to not do such. Other times, when said in an amusing or joking way it is about a Robin Hood like feeling, taking from the rich to give to the poor.
May the Lady understand.: This is a serious phrase, when someone does something which hurt someone else through either having little or no choice or by accident. It is a reverent phrase, like asking a god for forgiveness or instructing someone to ask for such forgiveness.

Special Abilities

Allomancy / Minstborn

Alomancy Table

Enoch, a rare Mistborn Allomancer, possesses the blood of Preservation. Burning ingested metals grants him extraordinary abilities. Tin sharpens his senses, steel lets him Push on metal, and iron allows Pulling. These are but a taste of his powers, each metal unlocking unique manipulations of the physical world. While many can access Allomancy, only a select few, like Enoch, can master its full breadth, making him a legend in the making.

Special Skills

Allomancy
Diplomacy
Sword Fighting
Eclipse Knight

Special Equipment

Vials of Metals: Multiple vials hidden on his person. One vial is tucked discreetly into a sheath along his boot, another hangs from a leather cord around his neck for quick access, and several more reside in specially designed slots woven into his belt, ensuring he always has a supply of Allomantic metals close at hand.
Mistcloak: A tattered, ash-stained cloak reminiscent of those worn by Mistborn. A mistcloak is a long, hooded garment traditionally made from hundreds of thin, ribbon-like strips of dark gray cloth. These strips are sewn together at the shoulders and chest, but flow freely below that, creating a billowing effect. The loose weave allows mist to partially obscure the wearer
Shardblade: A small, intricately carved dagger fashioned from a shard of metal believed to have originated from the Lord Ruler's atium reserves.
Etched Pendant: Crafted from a smooth, black stone, the pendant bears an inscription in the stylized script of the Terris language: "Hope is the fuel that allows the embers of defiance to burn brightest." - The Survivor of Hathsin

Staff of Echoed Metals

The Staff of Echoed Metals is an exquisite staff forged from an amalgam of rare metals, each echoing the mystical properties of various allomantic materials. The staff's surface swirls with shimmering patterns that reflect light as if alive with the pulses of the Allomantic powers it channels.

Abilities: This staff allows the wielder to magnify the effects of burned metals, extending the range and potency of allomantic abilities. Additionally, it can absorb and store a small portion of the expended metals' power, which can be released as a focused burst of energy, enhancing the user’s next allomantic effect dramatically.
Drawbacks: The staff’s powerful resonance with allomantic metals makes it highly detectable to other Allomancers, who can sense its presence from a great distance. Prolonged use of the staff leads to a quicker depletion of metal reserves within the user’s body, necessitating increased metal consumption to maintain allomantic strength.

History

Born a Skaa in the shadow of the Lord Ruler's iron fist, Enoch knew only the sting of oppression. His world was Luthadel, a city where fear veiled the embers of rebellion. Then came whispers of Kelsier, the Survivor, a mythic figure returned from the pits of Hathsin. Drawn to the flame of defiance, Enoch joined Kelsier's audacious crew, a peripheral player amidst titans. He watched as Vin, a street urchin turned Mistborn, blossomed under Kelsier's tutelage, the promise of revolution glittering in her eyes.

His own Allomantic spark, a rare gift among the downtrodden Skaa, ignited under Vin's watchful guidance. He learned to burn metals, their powers surging through him—the rush of steel, the whispers of tin, secrets to rival those held by the nobility. He stood witness to the night the Lord Ruler fell, Vin's power piercing the tyrant's immortal heart. Chaos swirled in the aftermath, a crucible in which Elend Venture, the idealistic nobleman, forged a fragile new order. Enoch, tempered by rebellion, fought beside his comrades, defending the fledgling democracy from those who clung to the old, brutal ways.

Then, the mists twisted. An ancient artifact, a touch of power from another age, tore him from all he knew. Elder Soteria, a realm of eldritch beauty and shadowed threats, became his unexpected exile. But adaptability was a Skaa's birthright. His Allomancy, a force unknown in this world, made him a warrior without peer. He joined the Eclipse Knights, sentinels against the encroaching darkness, finding echoes of his past struggle mirrored in their desperate fight.

And though the ache for Luthadel never truly faded, a new purpose took root within him. The legacy of the Survivor, the strength and compassion of Lady Vin, flowed in his blood. On the battlefields of Elder Soteria, he became their champion. Their stories became his creed, the spark of resistance he carried to this distant land. Enoch, the quiet Skaa boy who had yearned for a better world, now fought for justice across realms, his blade and his Allomantic power unwavering beacons of hope, testaments to the enduring legacy of Elend and Vin, the indomitable spirit of rebellion.

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 |fullname=Enoch
-|race=Human
+|race=Skaa
-|occ=Twinborn Allomancer & Feruchemist
+|occ=Allomancer / Eclipse Knight
 |rank=Expert
 |figure=Thin, lanky, with toned muscles.
 |age=22
-|eyes=Blue
+|eyecolor=Blue
+|haircolor=Brown
 |height=5'11
 |weight=146 lbs
+|status=Approved
+|setting=Embers of Soteria
+|player=Cyclops
 }}
+Enoch is an introspective young man, prone to careful thought and meticulous preparation. A tinge of self-consciousness colors his actions, yet beneath the surface lies a fierce crusader's heart. Once his loyalty is earned, he becomes an unwavering ally, though his slowness to anger can sometimes alienate others.
-Enoch found himself in the modern world, in a plush hotel, without any memory of how he got there or not.  HIs only possessions were a signet ring with the symbol of a spear over a shield and three vials full of flakes of various metals suspended in water.
+His deep religious convictions center around the Church of the Survivor, where he worships the legendary Kelsier, a man who endured the unendurable. Enoch also venerates Kelsier's heir, Lady Vin. Though he never met them, their role in the rebellion has elevated them to divine status in his eyes. Lady Vin embodies forgiveness and deceptive power, while Kelsier represents the quintessential hero, his strength bold and unconcealed.
-== Personality ==
+Enoch harbors a fundamental mistrust for traditional power structures. In his view, authority stems from earned trust, not titles or institutions. He prefers to exist outside the rigid confines of governments and controlling organizations.
-Enoch is a quiet young man, a thinker, preparer, with just a hint of self consciousness to him.  Deep down inside he is a crusader, if someone touches his heart they will find him a strong ally with ferocious loyalty, though some people are turned off by how slow he is to anger.
-== Amnesia ==
+=== Phrases ===
-Enoch has no memory of his past, though he has flashes that come at him when he uses his abilities.  Other things can also trigger feelings and thoughts that come at him disconnect, often in reverse or otherwise out of any reasonable order.
+; ''The Survivor is watching.'' : This is something to fear, and can be said either in jest or in a serious way.  When said in a serious way it is usually to do with cheating someone or planning to step on someone lower than yourself to get ahead, as a reason to not do such.  Other times, when said in an amusing or joking way it is about a Robin Hood like feeling, taking from the rich to give to the poor.
+; ''May the Lady understand.'' : This is a serious phrase, when someone does something which hurt someone else through either having little or no choice or by accident.  It is a reverent phrase, like asking a god for forgiveness or instructing someone to ask for such forgiveness.
+== Special Abilities ==
+* [http://coppermind.net/wiki/Allomancy Allomancy / Minstborn]
-Sometimes in his dreams he can remember someone, talking about not letting the voices of others convince you to do things that you know are wrong.  Always, however, there is a flash of a kind, thin face, with grey hair telling him that is especially true if you're the only one who can hear it.  It is like a joke but he has on idea why or what it means just that it makes him laugh in the dream.
+=== Alomancy Table ===
+[[File:allomancy-chart.jpg|thumb]]
-In the early morning hours when he is just about to wake up, he can also sometimes remember the face of a kind woman looking down at him.  He wants desperately to believe that is his mother, but he doesn't know if that is true.
+Enoch, a rare Mistborn Allomancer, possesses the blood of Preservation. Burning ingested metals grants him extraordinary abilities. Tin sharpens his senses, steel lets him Push on metal, and iron allows Pulling. These are but a taste of his powers, each metal unlocking unique manipulations of the physical world. While many can access Allomancy, only a select few, like Enoch, can master its full breadth, making him a legend in the making.
-=== Phrases ===
+== Special Skills ==
-There are things that Enoch says at times, off the cuff, which he has little explanation as to why or what they mean other than a general impression.
+* Allomancy
-; ''By the grace of Sazed.'' : He says this when something horrible happens, he knows that Sazed is a religious figure similar to the Christian God.
+* Diplomacy
-; ''The Survivor is watching.'' : This is something to fear, and can be said either in jest or in a serious way.  When said in a serious way it is usually to do with cheating someone or planning to step on someone lower than yourself to get ahead, as a reason to not do such.  Other times, when said in an amusing or joking way it is about a Robin Hood like feeling, taking from the rich to give to the poor.
+* Sword Fighting
+* Eclipse Knight
+== Special Equipment ==
+[[File:Mistcloak.png|thumb|A Mistcloak]]
+; Vials of Metals: Multiple vials hidden on his person. One vial is tucked discreetly into a sheath along his boot, another hangs from a leather cord around his neck for quick access, and several more reside in specially designed slots woven into his belt, ensuring he always has a supply of Allomantic metals close at hand.
+; Mistcloak: A tattered, ash-stained cloak reminiscent of those worn by Mistborn. A mistcloak is a long, hooded garment traditionally made from hundreds of thin, ribbon-like strips of dark gray cloth. These strips are sewn together at the shoulders and chest, but flow freely below that, creating a billowing effect. The loose weave allows mist to partially obscure the wearer
+; Shardblade: A small, intricately carved dagger fashioned from a shard of metal believed to have originated from the Lord Ruler's atium reserves.
+; Etched Pendant: Crafted from a smooth, black stone, the pendant bears an inscription in the stylized script of the Terris language: "Hope is the fuel that allows the embers of defiance to burn brightest." - The Survivor of Hathsin
+=== Staff of Echoed Metals ===
+[[File:Enoch-staff.png|thumb|Staff of Echoed Metals]]
+The Staff of Echoed Metals is an exquisite staff forged from an amalgam of rare metals, each echoing the mystical properties of various allomantic materials. The staff's surface swirls with shimmering patterns that reflect light as if alive with the pulses of the Allomantic powers it channels.
-== Abilities ==
+; Abilities: This staff allows the wielder to magnify the effects of burned metals, extending the range and potency of allomantic abilities. Additionally, it can absorb and store a small portion of the expended metals' power, which can be released as a focused burst of energy, enhancing the user’s next allomantic effect dramatically.
-Enoch is a Mistborn Allomancer as well as a Feruchemist, which makes him a Twinborn.  He is skilled at both, but more skilled at being a Mistborn by far, his specialty is in the use of Tin and Pewter.  Often when he uses Tin, however, keeping it on a low burn for too long he'll get flashes of a man, telling him a story about someone.  He can't ever remember the man's name who is telling him nor does he remember who it is about but he knows it is about someone very important to him.  This makes it difficult to use the metal in that way, even though he is very attuned to such use.
+; Drawbacks: The staff’s powerful resonance with allomantic metals makes it highly detectable to other Allomancers, who can sense its presence from a great distance. Prolonged use of the staff leads to a quicker depletion of metal reserves within the user’s body, necessitating increased metal consumption to maintain allomantic strength.
-For specifics on these abilities see [http://coppermind.net/wiki/Allomancy Allomancy] and [http://coppermind.net/wiki/Feruchemy Feruchemy] which lists what each metal does in each context and additional information on the abilities and how they are used.
+== History ==
+Born a Skaa in the shadow of the Lord Ruler's iron fist, Enoch knew only the sting of oppression. His world was Luthadel, a city where fear veiled the embers of rebellion. Then came whispers of Kelsier, the Survivor, a mythic figure returned from the pits of Hathsin. Drawn to the flame of defiance, Enoch joined Kelsier's audacious crew, a peripheral player amidst titans. He watched as Vin, a street urchin turned Mistborn, blossomed under Kelsier's tutelage, the promise of revolution glittering in her eyes.
-=== Innate Use ===
+His own Allomantic spark, a rare gift among the downtrodden Skaa, ignited under Vin's watchful guidance. He learned to burn metals, their powers surging through him—the rush of steel, the whispers of tin, secrets to rival those held by the nobility.  He stood witness to the night the Lord Ruler fell, Vin's power piercing the tyrant's immortal heart.  Chaos swirled in the aftermath, a crucible in which Elend Venture, the idealistic nobleman, forged a fragile new order. Enoch, tempered by rebellion, fought beside his comrades, defending the fledgling democracy from those who clung to the old, brutal ways.
-His abilities come to him like instinct, though he has learned a lot about them.  He no longer uses his abilities without meaning to, unless he is to the point of some emotional break.  He cannot always explain why or how he does what he does, however.  To him it makes sense but articulating such is always very difficult.
-== Religion ==
+Then, the mists twisted. An ancient artifact, a touch of power from another age, tore him from all he knew. [[Elder Soteria]], a realm of eldritch beauty and shadowed threats, became his unexpected exile.  But adaptability was a Skaa's birthright.  His Allomancy, a force unknown in this world, made him a warrior without peer.  He joined the Eclipse Knights, sentinels against the encroaching darkness, finding echoes of his past struggle mirrored in their desperate fight.
-Enoch is a religious man, though he has difficulty articulating into words what he believes since he doesn't remember specific things.  Mostly, however, what he believes seems to focus on a balance between two forces ''Preservation'' and ''Ruin'' and somehow a God-like figure, Sazed is the master of both but at the same time almost like a person as well.  He doesn't remember a lot except that there was a ''Final Ascension'' which started a ''New Empire'' which healed the world by using the two forces as one, under the guidance of the scholarly figure known as Sazed.
-[[Category:People]]
+And though the ache for Luthadel never truly faded, a new purpose took root within him.  The legacy of the Survivor, the strength and compassion of Lady Vin, flowed in his blood.  On the battlefields of Elder [[Soteria]], he became their champion. Their stories became his creed, the spark of resistance he carried to this distant land. Enoch, the quiet Skaa boy who had yearned for a better world, now fought for justice across realms, his blade and his Allomantic power unwavering beacons of hope, testaments to the enduring legacy of Elend and Vin, the indomitable spirit of rebellion.